That new render is a significant improvement. I like how it makes use of 5th street, but it looks a little tight on 17th. I'm also a little surprised that the city would butcher that left hand turn so badly, but I can't say I'd be against all the added patio space.
The public art looks a little phoned it. What's it supposed to be representative of? I like public art, but man if all we get is weak pop-art and boiler plate abstraction we might as well not do it at all. It's all in the eye of the behold, but this proposal is unremarkable.