Signage should be below the canopy so as a pedestrian you can read them.
Wouldn't have minded the angled window surrounds on the front too.
The central portion of the upper block should be pulled forward and rounded as well to match the ground level at the entrance.
If the canopy isn't waterproof, there's no point to it. Don't know how finished these drawings are, but if this is any indication on the expected final state, it's not really clear:
I really don't get why we don't put real weather proofing up (i.e. an awning that actually blocks rain and sun) or nothing at all because it's pointless to have weird metal grates above doors for no reason. In this case it's on the shady south side of 17th Avenue, so sun sheltering isn't needed at anytime of the year except like 2 hours a day June 19 - 23.
The signs are placeholders, but would be great to see pedestrian-oriented ones as 100% of future retail traffic will be coming from the sidewalk, and not looking directly across from the park.
I forget the real name for this kind of sign, but the ones that stick out over the sidewalk so people can easily see the name of the place when walking up. The nearby comery block bar:
I find it interesting the that the designs show the temporary summer patio configuration. Businesses and development have woken up to the usefulness of extra patio space on 17th Avenue to the extent they show up in renderings now. Such a shame the sidewalks weren't permanently widened during the renovations to the street the past decade.
Overall a good development, but still on the basic side for such a prominent area. As it's design is pretty standard stuff, it's really relying on high quality materials to provide any sort of wow factor.