Ground floor could use some work here - the ridiculously large road setback on Edmonton Trail isn't helping either. The rendering and the design both overestimate how steep the slope is, it's almost like they couldn't imagine designing anything on a slope so they just plopped a design for a perfectly flat site down and called it a day.
I think the grade as shown is pretty accurate. They could however attempt to modify it instead of just perching on top of the existing area well above the sidewalk. Not sure where the property line falls however.
Excellent, I didn't even know about this one. Decent design, and appropriate scale for Edmonton Tr. I agree that the ground floor treatment isn't ideal, but I think that's more a result of the site context than the design.